Critical writing patterns and learning strategies among vocational college students: Evidence from thesis writing

Putera, Zulmy Faqihuddin, Suyono, Suyono, Rofiuddin, Ahmad, Harsiati, Titik and Shofiah, Nurul (2025) Critical writing patterns and learning strategies among vocational college students: Evidence from thesis writing. Jurnal Pendidikan Vokasi, 15 (2). pp. 166-177. ISSN Jurnal Pendidikan Vokasi

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Abstract

Developing critical writing skills remains a persistent challenge for vocational college students whose learning environments emphasize practical and technical competencies over academic discourse. Research specifically examining how vocational students demonstrate critical thinking in thesis writing is still limited. This study investigates (1) the patterns of critical writing that emerge in students’ thesis reports and (2) students’ perceptions of the strategies they use when engaging in critical writing. A qualitative design combining content analysis and thematic analysis was applied. Data were collected from 22 final thesis reports from 12 study programs and reflective statements and interviews with 10 Diploma-4 students. The analytical framework was adapted from Paul and Elder’s substantive writing skills. The findings show that vocational students demonstrate strengths in explanation and basic analysis; however, more advanced cognitive skills—such as synthesis, evaluation, and argument construction—remain weak. Students rarely develop counterarguments, critically examine opposing views, or integrate sources into coherent reasoning. Thematic analysis further reveals that students perceive critical writing as fulfilling structure and format rather than as a process of reasoning, evaluation, and synthesis. Difficulties are concentrated in topic delimitation, literature review, paraphrasing, and maintaining academic integrity, while supervisor feedback becomes the primary driver of writing progress. Overall, the study highlights a gap between students’ high motivation and their limited epistemic awareness of academic argumentation. These results emphasize the need for explicit instruction, structured scaffolding, and feedback focused on argument development rather than formatting. The study contributes to the literature by offering detailed insights into how critical writing develops within vocational higher education contexts and by proposing practical directions for instructional improvement.

Item Type:	Journal Article
Keywords:	academic literacy; critical thinking; critical writing; thesis writing; vocational education
Subjects:	13 EDUCATION > 1301 Education Systems > 130103 Higher Education 20 LANGUAGE, COMMUNICATION AND CULTURE > 2004 Linguistics > 200401 Applied Linguistics and Educational Linguistics 20 LANGUAGE, COMMUNICATION AND CULTURE > 2001 Communication and Media Studies 20 LANGUAGE, COMMUNICATION AND CULTURE > 2004 Linguistics 20 LANGUAGE, COMMUNICATION AND CULTURE > 2005 Literary Studies
Divisions:	Faculty of Psychology > Department of Psychology
Depositing User:	Nurul Shofiah
Date Deposited:	08 Jul 2026 11:10

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